I would agree with you but I’m not quite sure what your stance is. Do you support the continue occupation of Afghanistan or are you against it. This blog post is quite confusing you make points that oppose the war and then make counter arguments that support it. I feel as if you had mixed feelings about the war. And if this was the case you should have given closing arguments that expressed that. So that the reader could better understand what your position is.
Friday, April 13, 2012
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I would agree with you but I’m not quite sure what your stance is. Do you support the continue occupation of Afghanistan or are you against it. This blog post is quite confusing you make points that oppose the war and then make counter arguments that support it. I feel as if you had mixed feelings about the war. And if this was the case you should have given closing arguments that expressed that. So that the reader could better understand what your position is.
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